LA FILLE ET L'OISEAU - created by lolu


LA FILLE ET LOISEAU
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(5 years and 3218 days ago)

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avatar apocalips
apocalips says:

beau travail ,bonne chance

avatar greymval
greymval says:

Un peu creepy, mais jolie
I believe the idea is that she captures the landscape in her mind.
Man, that's a brave concept and I don't know how i would have done it better, except for Not using the plastic wrap & other filters on her face.
I would also make the composition so that her eye is at 1/3rd of the image and not right in the center.
Add an overlay on the background to enhance colors and desaturate just a bit (maybe also blur) the image in her head! After-all memories are not clear, you can't remember all the details of an image unless you're an autistic.
C'est ton choix de suivre ou non mes suggestions; ci oui et quelque chose n'est pas clair dis-moi.

author says:

Je suis tout à fait d'accord avec tes remarques, surtout en ce qui concerne le filtre plastic sur son visage.
Je pense que je vais reprendre cette photo à zero et essayer de l'embellir un peu...
merci pour tes conseils greymval.

author says:

I've changed the picture hope you like it !

avatar greymval
greymval says:

Well i think it's way better, and I really like it! Now, maybe you should hear other comments too, cause i don't wanna influence your design too much. The composition has improved now, and it's creepy no more

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Fantastic,imaginative,effective, surreal...well done author...instant fav from me...best of luck

avatar gornats
gornats says:

i think it was better before, it looked like some kind of perception(not memories) and was more original.

avatar arca
arca says:

Lovely surreal image ... it is nice to see an image that is surreal and not "dark" ... good for you for succeeding so well!

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