The image is a bit too high contrast, making it confusing to see exactly what you have here. Is she pregnant or oddly pear shaped? Between the spines and the black shapes, it's almost impossible to discern whether that is some sort of one sided green scarf draped around her, or a solid object that she can store stuff into...

Pesonally, I would suggest just cropping off the bottom entirely, since it doesn't really add to your composition. The focus should be on her face, anyway...

Interesting concept, but the execution needs some adjustment to better communicate your subject.

i think that you've just spoiled the girl....