This is my first entry so I'm looking for that constructive criticism :)
(I edited it so it looks a bit better now, if anyone else has suggestions, LET IT RIP!) (5 years and 3121 days ago)
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very good first entry ...... i think the greenish shadow should emanate from the door (not over the columns), and the columns look a bit flat on the pavement.
i would play more with the orb too , since is the centerpiece of the title.
overall looks pretty good.... and good luck
The 'classic' columns in conjunction with the 'modern' green orb is very intriguing. Gornats has good advice. Try varying up the idea a bit. Maybe make a brighter glow behind the orb and then a larger, less bright glow behind that. Maybe lighten the top portion of the dark doorway a bit with a soft transition to dark. These are merely small ideas. I like what you've done author. Nice first entry!
Thanks for the comments guys, I will end up re-posting it probably then. Do I leave this one or do I delete it?
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This looks cool! like the entrance to a magical castle good job!
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