Oh my.. this is such a nice story you have come up with.. you may want to place some shadows under the Elephant to ground him.. and I realize the blur on the swan is for depth, but I think a bit of definition might help..,(Placing the source over it and using blending modes and fade opacity might give it some oomph) (it's lacking a bit of density).. but it's your vision author.. good luck and good job .. and as always IMHO

Thanx a lot of the comment....... iv tried adding a shadow..... hope it's better now...... adding the source along with blending modes kinda made it lot choppy so didnt do it........ any ways thanx a lot for the suggetions...........

good idea like it gl author

Which one is ugly?

LOL actually i tried portraying the Ugly duckling story but here an elephant was born like a swan :P