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There are no shadows behind the man or the bottle, and the light reflection on the bottle is from the wrong side, since the sun is behind it.
nice scene u created , GL
Draw a line from the sun through the base of the umbrella. That's where your shadow should be. As mentioned, the man & bottle need shadows also. Good mood & color.
His back should also be shadowed, try to clone the shadow he already has to the extent of all his back surface - or paint it and multiply, if it's easier.
The umbrella should also have a shadow of it's own.
The transition from the sea to land seems a little to smooth for me. Although good entry author
Author, the revision is much better...good luck!
Good job on the shadowing and sunset blend with your horizon. Where does the water and sand separate?
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