(5 years and 3060 days ago)
3 Sources:
- 1: clear water
- 2: background
- 3: column
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The filter used on the columns is very fake looking, because it is too flat and does not change in perspective as it recedes into the horizon line.
Also, the pool you used is at a different angle than the contest source, which makes the lines look extremely crooked, and the pool then appears to be tilting.
The statue is too large in proportion to the pool, and the lighting is not consistent with the rest of the image.
This is a really good concept, but it looks very rushed, without enough attention to detail...
Well commented MossyB. This is a good entry Author. However, i agree with MossyB. Please take the feedback as a way to improve and advance your entry and artistic skills.
I hope that you get the time to make adjustments to your entry.
Thank you for comments i did some adjustments and waiting for new comments.
Love the changes.. If you look at the base of your NEW coloms you will see that they do not connect to your floor. To fix this add shadowing.
:look where your light comes from, use your BURN tool to add shadow. IF you want more information on how to do this Message me.
GOOD LUCK .
Shadow added.Thank you !
The 4 back columns look like they are hanging over the pools edge.... I would just make them a bit smaller, it will also had depth to the image
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