Sand in a Bottle - created by ramsesje


Sand in a Bottle
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thanks to yenhoon (5 years and 2989 days ago)

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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The "Sand in a bottle" label is blurry and hard to read. I wouldn't use a drop shadow with text.

avatar IDt8r
IDt8r says:

I like the "give yourself a beach tan" text, but the "sand in a bottle text" is kind of hard to read. What you might try is using the same technique you used for the "give yourself..." text on the "sand..." text, only make the text dark and the shadow light, know what I mean? Maybe you'll like that better.

author says:

thank you for the comment and advice
I'll see what I can do tomorrow

avatar kushpatel
kushpatel says:

realistic work author..

author says:

thank you Kushpatel

author says:

@ Mossy B and IDt8r I made some changes to the text "sand in a bottle"
I also added an sbs

avatar IDt8r
IDt8r says:

I like the change. It looks very classy.

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Much easier to read, good improvement!

avatar DanLundberg

More contrast would be punchier. And shouldn't it be "TAN in a Bottle"? For me, the sand is an irritant, not an objective, when I go to the beach; the last thing I want to do is spray sand on myself. (Or is this somehow an exfoliant?)

author says:

@ DanLundberg - It was ment humoristic - with the picture of the woman all covered with sand

avatar JoeCacia
JoeCacia says:

I will have one for me here! lol

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