In my honest opinion, if it's any worth, this would work better with a white background. Not that the source is bad or something like that, but having "cartoony style" elements backed with a photograph... well, just doesn't do. Don't be affraid to try a second time and enhance your work!

I think there is some great ideas here.. think outside the square author.. REMEMBER this is a t shirt image not a scene construction.

some ideas: ditch the background but keep the billboard.

The billboard is a great idea that will work on a shirt.

love that you have used the website page .

GOOD Luck . i look forward to see if you get time to rework this entry .

Fun concept but I don't get this as a T-shirt. It's mixture of cartoon and photo with blurry PXLEyes-Web-site screen shot (which should be the real focus) just doesn't work IMO.

I'm sorry I didn't get it was for a t-shiert I looked at it quick first time around I had jus redone But I will go back in again and get red of backround Thanks all

I think this would look cool if the map was your background

Ok all I did a redo I didn't see that it was for a t-shirt i hope I'm on the right path now. Thanks everyone for comments.Oh someone said a wh backround Now I understand why.

Oops, you made the same spelling mistake I made in my earlier comment (please slap some sense into me!): no apostrophe in possessive pronouns [his, hers, its, yours, ours, theirs].

This seems too detailed for a T-shirt plus I think more than one PXL logo is too many. The map is cool but the right edge needs cropping to match the other three sides. A simple billboard (no workmen) atop a much more tilted map could be compelling. "Less is more."

DanLundberg Thanks for pointing that out to me...lol I took care of the spelling mistake

Oh Yes I took care of the border...Thanks