air ship - created by Se7eN0f9


air ship
Favs: 17SBS: n/aHi-resRank: 1/13Score: 69.6% (40)9833 views

(5 years and 3031 days ago)

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avatar Vexycon
Vexycon says:

under the rope should not be shadow, and should be seen attached to the boat if it is an idea, everything else is ok ,although perhaps a bit to fill the picture with something IMO .
GL

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

It's a little to monochromatic, and the square window at the bottom is placed strangely on the building, although the values are excellent, with the fine details in the shadows still visible.

I agree with Vexycon, the rope looks like a flat cardboard cutout stuck on, with that dark edge on the bottom, and no curvature shading and highlights.

author says:

thx for the comments peeps, got rid of the rope, replaced it for a chain, looks better imo

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Much better with the chain.

avatar dekwid
dekwid says:

wow..........!

avatar DanLundberg

Dramatic and evocative. You've turned the Black Pearl (source 2) into the Gray Pearl which is a bit bland. I think greater contrast on the hull and whiter sails would be more compelling.

The chain works as a concept. I think it needs a lot more links, however, so the link at the hull is appropriately small. The stretched near links not to mention the circular link near the hull are odd. Furthermore, I would expect a towing chain to be perpendicular to the masts (when towing through the air) and in line with the bow-to-stern center line of the ship (unless a turn is being made).

I think I would just eliminate the chain and brighten (and bring forward a tad [thinking Rule of Thirds]?) the upper-right corner so it is clearly the focus of the image. Because we can't see what is pulling the chain, it doesn't add a whole lot of explanation for the air ship.

And the big, square window on the house creates a distracting, fairy-tale feel (to expand on MossyB's original observation).

avatar gchiou2008

My fav !

avatar mounirupa
mounirupa says:

Wow... nice colors & nice concept.. all d best author..

avatar DanielaOwergoor

This is awesome!!!!

Instant fav!

avatar designed
designed says:

in your face pirates .................. love it and fav it

author says:

thx peeps for all the compliments!

author says:

Well i know ur all voted and fav my formel pic but it was removed for some of the images i used, i changed it although i had little time i hope u all still like it and thx for the votes and fav in the earlier image..

avatar DigwasHegde

Great....

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waiphyo says:

So so much love it .....

avatar passionboy

very nice work...

avatar neo2011
neo2011 says:

great

avatar kushpatel
kushpatel says:

beautiful work author

avatar Dubhy63
Dubhy63 says:

I love castles,ships and art,got all in one,great design !

avatar CorneliaMladenova

Stunning

avatar madamemonty

Congrats, terrific work

avatar CorneliaMladenova

Congratulations!

avatar Chuck
Chuck says:

Nice Job Congrats on your Win

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