The lighting is too dark and inconsistent. What light source illuminates her hair and face so much, yet everything else she's wearing is matte black except for the tiny buttons? Moody is one thing, but the lighting needs to have some small modicum of realism...

Dear Mossy, i have followed your advices and hope the light is better now !

very nice love the scene just one thing.. the pumpkin has no back? its just a mask looks like it... because u see the background right thru it.. other then that very nice and high marks.

edit: thats better author

Thanks Eladine, oups it's true i made a mistake !! I come back with a real big pumpkin !

nice work although I do find the shadows conflicting

Beautiful witch castle