where are her legs? even on a swing i supose you see her legs thats the thing that immidiatly got my eye and what looks odd to me here.. I like the mood, the light, the set up but the swing idea with no legs dont dawn on me much also I think you shouldnt put the spiderweb like a square.. id turn it a bit and put it in a corner triangle filling.

Good mood, but the bar shadows need work. First, there wouldn't be shadows at all on the inside of the wall. Second,the shadows on the floor would be parallel to the ones on the sill. Just draw a line from the light source through the bars and onto the floor to adjust.

Thanks Bob..you're right..i made the adjustments to the shadow..thank you for the comment..@ Eladine, i dont know why your eyes get drawn to that..just look at the source..she's on the swing and u dont see her legs..i even made the dress longer to account for the position of her feet..if theres something im not seeing, please let me know..but i have adjusted the spider web a little, i made it a little rounder..i had put it in the corner but i liked it better this way..thank u for your comment.

Lovely mood, perfect shading/lightning. Perhaps the reflections on her should be more yellowish, since the light source, candles, release yellow light.

Thank you for your comment Akassa..i adjusted the color a little bit on her right side.

Author, much improved...good luck!

Instant fav!..pretty mood and love the lightning.