The distorted areas are very blurry looking, and the eyes look too much like stickers pasted on top, rather than integrated into the actual face. They have no depth, and look very flat.

This is an imaginative concept, but the technical execution needs some work.

Great Idea for a beginning contest, you could reproduce the LINES of the fence and place them over the manipulations for more reality and a gentle burn tool on the edges of the side of the eyes will give them more roundness.

Just a little help (I love your cookie monster colors )... good luck author