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Figure's a bit blurry. If you were trying for a motion blur effect, IMO it didn't work too well. The action pose of the figure is great, and so is the title! GL author.
thanks, is my first motion blur effect,
The trainsformer looks pretty cool, but would it be an idea to let him skate (right?) on the rails itself? If so, you could flip the background image to let the track fit with the trainsformer's foot. And maybe -but that's of course up to you- you coud make the background & doggie a bit smaller so that the robot looks more massively huge and impressive. Good luck!
thanks Wasowski, good ideas, I try to use the dog smaller but i don't like too much.... but I love the idea about skate.
Alrighty, though imo the dog does ask quite some attention (size and pretty bright) eventhough it does look funny in the image. About skating, I mentioned to flip the background, but on second thought you did make the composition pretty ok (trainsformer as one diagonal, train tracks as opposite diagonal), perhaps the image could be a bit cropped on the right side. Anyway, in case you want the TF skate on the tracks, perhaps you can adjust the right (for viewer left) foot a bit...Good luck!
I did. decreases the dog and took the blurriness of the robot...
Much better, author...I can believe he's skating on the rail.
Love this work!! impressive..
high marks author!! GL.
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