Not exactly a family picture, boy should have been made smaller, to fit size ratio of picture

I like what you've done with this, some great find of sources (specially the car!)

Maybe you can have a look again at the boy? It stands out IMHO, to big and the colors do not match, the 'photo filter' and/or the 'match color' function will probably fix that color problem.
Something I would do is to crop the right area out (up until the bottle), IMHO improves the composition. Some minor fast changes which improve your entry IMHO.

But like I said: I like it

Hey thanks spellweaver and robvdn..
I'll fix those things as soon as possible..
yes tiny changes can improve a lot!.. well said!
thanks for your comments.

Made an update,did some changes..thanks guys for the advice

Where is the sink!? Ok I hope he's not my next delivery boy, lol.

LOL Emik.. I don't want this delivery boy either on my next order of pizza..hahaaa