
http://trisste-brushes.deviantart.com/art/wounds-25145474 thanks to trisste-brushes (5 years and 2706 days ago)
10 Sources:
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Zombie Scream ![]() by etherwarrior 10560 views - final score: 66.6% | Back From The Dead ![]() by jadedink 11713 views - final score: 65.6% | souvenir ![]() by AYRD1 4028 views - final score: 65.2% |
so lonely ![]() by Se7eN0f9 3758 views - final score: 62.7% | Angry ![]() by dhee 6595 views - final score: 61.7% | terror ![]() by SHIPLEYGIRL 4137 views - final score: 60.5% |
stay at home dont go out ![]() by jack2 9490 views - final score: 60.1% | Back From The Grave ![]() by George55 8765 views - final score: 59.5% | nightmare ![]() by SHIPLEYGIRL 4272 views - final score: 59.5% |
Angus Scrimm Fan ![]() by Drivenslush 5740 views - final score: 59% | wanna play ![]() by SHIPLEYGIRL 5791 views - final score: 57.2% | Baby Zombie and the Hakuna Matata Moment ![]() by Drivenslush 11510 views - final score: 56.3% |
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She looks too cut and paste, like she is floating above the walk path. The head is also anatomically off, with the face looking too large and far away from the rest of the head and neck.
An interesting concept, but the technical execution needs a bit more attention to detail.
thanks mossy but i didn't touch the head and neck , take a look at the original picture of the model
You have so many sources, hard to find which one. It will help in the future if you title them such as "head and neck," "lungs," "wound," etc. instead of "Source 1," "Source 2," etc...
You're right, the body is unaltered from your source. It then becomes your overall composition that makes it seem too large and poorly placed within the image. This is a visual "illusion" created by the eye's movement from your other elements, colors, and value choices. But since your focus was a zombie effect, more than an optical illusion of distortion, I still stand by my last statement that your technical execution needs work to create a more visually believable balance of the elements used.
ok thanks
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