silent storage - created by sienly


silent storage
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(5 years and 2460 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Nicely done. It's usually better to include a hi res version as well. GL author.

author says:

thanks

(5 years and 2458 days ago)


avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

I'd like to see a high res and a basic step by step would also help you receive any informed critique based on your own processes.

However I have a few suggestions:

I would be inclined to extend the streaks of light out of the image (at the moment they look to be cut off)

Drop the reflection of the storage hut down a nudge or two and mask off where the bushes are in the reflection, to me it seems as though the storage hut is to noticeable in the reflection where it is meant to be hidden behind the bushes.... the water line area of the reflection would be darker, judging by your overall lighting.

lastly it could benefit from a foreground element to frame and lead the eye into your scene.....

GL Author

author says:

wow..
that's why i must learn more
thnks

(5 years and 2458 days ago)


avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

I think some birds flying out of the top right side of hut would finish it off nicely

author says:

hmm..
u r right!
why i not think about that -__-
thnks..

(5 years and 2458 days ago)


avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

avatar Heathcliffe

Good work with your entry. I think I agree with oziipop that another point of focus would have enhanced your scene. I'm wondering too about the angle / perspective of the reflection but think you've done a very nice job. Good Luck.

author says:

thnks so much

(5 years and 2456 days ago)


avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

congrats!

author says:

thanks

(5 years and 2453 days ago)


avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

Good job on third

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