Entry number 85771 - created by Chuck


Entry number 85771
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(5 years and 2355 days ago)

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Not bad, try some shadows.

author says:

Thanks CMYK46 :0 I have some on bottom ...Do I need more?

(5 years and 2355 days ago)


avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

I don't see them, and you've created conflicting light sources by flipping the cup at right. The light on the others is from the left.

author says:

Thanks I'll get on it.

(5 years and 2355 days ago)


avatar spaceranger

The perspective is off. The cups in the foreground would be much rounder top and bottom and you would see into the cups at the tops since they are below eye level.

author says:

Thanks spaceranger I will take care of.

(5 years and 2354 days ago)


avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

You always have to think..."where is my light source?" even when collecting stock photos to use. I have turned down fantastic stock photos simple because the light source did not match with the piece I was working on. If you don't think where your shadows are CMYK46 will be the first to let you know! lol isn't that right Bob? :P
He does know what he is talking about.

avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

you know what would be nice...is if you,
duplicated the cups
flipped vertically
Gaussian blur about 40%
drop opacity to 30%.
then you would have a nice reflective surface coming from your tiled counter. look sharp!

avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

cool! now take the farthest cup reflection, and erase gradually. getting heavier with the eraser as you get closer to it. This one in the back would be less prominent then the others. Also gently erase the reflection where the bottoms meet the existing cup. I would say about same distance as your shadow.

author says:

Thanks I took care of and Thanks for the help.

oziipop says:

and it looks great!

(5 years and 2355 days ago)


author says:

Thanks!

avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

Your corners are still too sharp on the 'cups' using the ellipse will create the correct shape, also the dark line at the top of the cup would also have a slight curve - following spacerangers advice regarding eye levels. Lastly take some time to clone out the repeating patterns you have on all the cups. (make the two front different to the one at the back)

author says:

Thanks
Took care of.

(5 years and 2353 days ago)


avatar spaceranger

You've done a great job improving your entry! Listening to helpful advice from these good members will make you a better artist. No matter what the outcome of the contest you should be proud of what you've done and your willingness to accept advice has earned you my respect.

author says:

Thanks! I have always appreciated the advise I've got from those in here who have helped me through the years on here. There has been good times and bad. I can say I have learn from members on here and they all know who they are.Yea I haven't done anything in here for a while but trying to fit time in for it. And Keep Learning!

(5 years and 2348 days ago)


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