Nice work with the transparency of the dress.

well its okey

Author, I deleted my comment on light source after looking at the source image again. GL!

thanx man!!!!

Suggestion: try cleaning up some of the lines by her right ear hairline, her left arm and also her left foot. You did great making at making the fabric sheer!

Really quite lovely! I agree with the touch ups k5683 suggested, that's all it needs IMO.

nice clean image. great job starting off this contest. g/l

very beautiful!

Love the arousing effect...lol! GL author!

Why only inner beauty, she is absolutely beautiful

very fresh and i love the transparancy effect and pastel color ! Good luck author

I love the Taj Mahal it's one of the most beautiful structures ever created. I like the color of your image. I do feel the reflection is a bit too uniform and rippled, might look better if it were a little less so since the water itself is so placid IMHO.

This is a beautiful shot. Agree with spaceranger about the reflection. It would also be really effective if you lowered the opacity of the reflection too. It would give this a more subtle, realistic look to the whole image. Nice job!!

EDIT: Looks

edit: Changes has been done. Thanks you spaceranger & pixelkid for your opinions.

I like the changes, much more subtle and has a nice tranquil feeling.

Well done. IMO the reflections of cliffs and Taj should be bumped up towards the waters edge more, as you would not see that much of the reflection. Maybe a tad ripple in water near bends in structure. Love the depth and lighting! GL Author!

beautiful!

Beautiful scene author...Very moody and mystical....best of luck

Thanks sgc, Androla and erathion for your appreciations.

awesome blending!

AMAZING BLENDING!!!

oh man.. this is so hard to look at.. very well done.. but still hard to look at LOL

That old saying comes to mind "nice bod shame about the face". Great job.LMAO

Light on head is opposite light source on the body.

Light on head is opposite light source on body.

Author...if you make the head slightly smaller it would help. You've done a great job with color match and blend...just the head size is all I see to change. Just a thought! Nice work, author!

super cool work author...u could put some hairs on his/hers chest for more hilarious result...GL

Needs chest hair to be convincing.

Very well done

Good blending on this, and nice fix on the lips.

The image looks like the glass was broken from the inside - there are no glass shards on the windowsill with the shells... Well done, but a bit confusing.

I know, a bit confusing to me too, lol. But did you find the butterfly?

This look so cool...U did really good job with hard source image...best of luck author

Beautiful work!! And yes, I found the butterfly!!!

I hope it took you quite some time to find it, lol. Thanks guys.

It did! It could only be found in the enlarged high res! Again, wonderful job!

With the amount of green happening 'outside'...I would think there would be more traces of that color showing thru the blue window...but the way you have it is cool...I wouldn't change it. It's more dramatic this way...

A nice idea, and about that butterfly it took me 3 sec, sorry . It's just cause it's placed in the left side and as soon as you Hi-res and scroll down you see it. It was fun nonetheless, and you made your viewers check the high resolution, which is always a good thing to do.

lol, didn't think about that, too bad it only took you 3 seconds, I was hoping for at least 5 = )
And thank you all for all the nice comments, and I agree with the green, I did add some, but not enough I think so too.

Great concept and well done ... I found the butterfly ...it took me a little longer than greymval but not too much. I was very methodical about it and definitely has to High-high res to locate it! Lovely work! Bravo!

I am surprised this didn't do better. Lovely concept ... maybe it was too subtle. I think a lot of people don't view in Hi-res and in this picture it was very important to "see" it. Anyway it is a winner in my book!

The breast area is a bit skewed to her left side, but otherwise, this is quite lovely!

hi thanks for noticing...i just make some fixes...hope breast looks ok now???also added sbs.

The "cleavage center" between the breasts is still off-center. It should be matching up with the center of her clavicle above it.
It is also quite flat looking. Since breasts are spherical and extend out from the body, you need some values of shading beneath to give the illusion of form and depth.

great drawings...best of luck

hi thanks to all the comments,it'll help me improved...i will make fixes on the breast area try to make it more look larger though i'm flat chested hihi...kidding!!!