This is antique?

lol well it does have a 50s feel

Vintage is cool but not antique. But accepting vintage as artistic license: Dramatic image although the moon is a bit too dark to make an impact. I think the second line of text would be more compelling as simply "Destroy your cinnamon craving."

I'm old enough to be vintage, but I don't recall a cinnamon craving in the past that needed to be destroyed. Are you referencing something in particular?

I WANT A WHOLE PLATE, do they serve oysters on the half shell as well??? oh my thighs!!! good luck author, very retro

nice

CONGRATS

Congrats!!

this is hilarious and really well executed...i loved the muted blue color tone you used....congrats

nice ideea.. good job.. try to crop the the upper part of the image ..i think it will bring more focus on the eyes

Smudge work is too obvious. Move the image up and leave some black space for the type at bottom. You'll have a better composition.

Yeap!!! I like it that obvious!..
Thanks pshoudini..and thank u too ciulama im gonna crop it
a little bit..thanks for commenting.

The edges on the side look very crude and poorly done, with an odd, jagged effect that does not correspond with the rest of the image, and extreme blurring which does not match the harsh jagged edge.

Cute idea, but the technical execution needs work.

Hey MossyB,u r right!,
,i did an effect to the whole pic that put the image extremely blurry
im gonna do an update on that ..thanks for the comment.

Made an update..for this pic im gonna be in the "safe zone",no fx at all..
its a lot cleaner..
and yes hes going to have a good good time!!!..

You can try to make the beak rise too

Oh yeah..nice tip!! ps.robgd thanks
im going to try that.

you're welcome!

Of course it's just my opinion, but IF you really want to use typography in an entry then I'd strongly recommend you to use another font than the Comic sans that you chose. Unless there's an extremely good reason that you want it. But then again, that's just my idea. Good luck!

thanks for your comments wazowski, but i dont have commercial fonts.

Try 1001freefonts.com. They have alot of great fonts and they're all free. If you see one for sale, it's not from the site, though. They have a tendancy to be aggressive with advertising when you click certain things.

Left side looks too flat, right side looks too dark. I would work on it, try to give it more depth.

I'm rather not conviced great concept though