The lighting on the bottom of the chin and under the cigar throws the effect off. Perhaps you can darken it with "selective color" making a selection and then darkening/tinting the whites.

EDIT: Nice correction. Looks much better!
That cigar in her mouth just kills me!

I see what you mean, Mossy. While I haven't had much success with "selections" inside an image - I did grab a soft BURN brush and darkened alternately the "shadows" and the "midtones" at about 7% each. Definite improvement in the overall blend.

Thanks for the help.

Thats one Butt Ugly Critter...

This made me cringe...it's perfect!

super cool neat work...gl author

I like that you added a different background and blurred it to add dimension, good source finds. Well done!

Thank you, Pearlie.

Should of got second........this was more original

congrats! This one was pretty funny!

congrats for the 3rd place

Congrats!!

Congrats on your win