IMHO would be much better without the text.

I like it! though, I agree with robvdn about the text. Now there is not a unique focus point with the two red colors (the text and the red girl's hair) If you want to focus the girl you will achieve it removing the text or maybe in another color?

Done... Thank you people. I put the legend in the entry description

Where's the groom? Human skull in background is too large compared to the woman.

love the effect awesomely done! GL

Not too shabby, good album too.

This I like :P

Very Nice work, Love the source image you chose ... good catch!

Pretty good copy, good find on the beat up kid! Perfect type.

apples and oranges,,,RIP syd barrett

The cover is too garish, and the ribbon just stops abruptly. Try to make this more realistic, keeping in mind the cover could be more subtle. It also would have a light source, and hence a shadow. GL.

Thanks CMYK46 I hope this is what you ment. I did a little retouch far as the ribbon its just a marker and I didn't do anything with it. Its the same as original was same spot. I could have cut it out maybe?

Do you see how you made some parts a bit dark just on the edge of the binding of the book (to the left)? Trying doing that to the whole front of the book to give it an older look. Try giving it an overlay tone that makes it look older.

Thanks k5683 I did some changes to age it I think that was what CMYK46 was trying to tell me I added three colors to add some age to it does it look any better?

author... it's gud but cover is very bright.. and inner part is luk like old so give original book color to color than look like nice.. and your inner color(gray) that's need some grunge background than luk older book
i think you understand wat iam say

Ok Thanks all I have scrapped album and redid it I hope this looks better.I used original with adjustments.

ya.. it's seems gud but gray paper seems it creating paper so remove gray color and add old paper to your album

Ok Thanks here is change removing gray.

Needs shadows to look realistic: cover shadows on album interior and on atlas, tassel shadows, ribbon shadow.

DanLundberg, thank you for the comment it was very helpfull. Shall work on it today as suggested.

great idea,very nice

AMAZING. i really love this one.

Love the old look. This album reminds me that it's hight time for me to arrange my family album too