(5 years and 3601 days ago)
The man in the right is too clear. He should be blurry like the rest of the background. Also "cousin It" or whatever that is in front looks like they have no arms. I think they're a little dark and the edges are a little fuzzy.
Boats & figures seem small to me, but good idea...
Thanks for the comments. CMYK is right, increase the size of boats and figures.
Are you telling yourself to increase the size of the boats and figures ?
Already done. Look at the SBS.
Like your idéa, but I think it should look better if you increased the wideness of the lake at the right side, stretch it to the trees on the right side so it keeps the same distance like the trees on the left side.
(Excuse my english, hope you understand what i mean)
Why you want to look for symmetry?.I know that the perspective of the right side does not match.This can have a high ground sense .
Author, thank you for accepting my suggestion. IMHO the image is improved. Also, good for you not accepting comments that make no sense. Good luck to you.
They still seem a little small (the boats and people) IMHO.
The idea is good
they seem too small
Howdie stranger!
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