Nice concept but it's too bright, her arms, hands and even the dress basically blend with the background. By the way you should make the dress a little transparent to look more realistic, with all that light you should be able to clearly see her legs (the shape).

Akassa, thank you for the tip of the legs should be clear that due to luminance.
Subtly I made this change, I hope that is noticeable!

About too much light in some parts of the body, well, my personal view is that blinding light of heaven.

Thank you for your comment and help!

overall composition is good.. only complaint is that she looked 'sad' to go back to heaven?

OH MY!!!

Agree with Drivenslush!!!

Her skin tones are very blotchy and strange - Her forehead looks almost green, while her jawline looks bruised...Makeup should even out the skin tones, not emphasize them.
You've also whitened her eyes and teeth a bit too much. Sometimes, less is more.

Boy, his hairline is low enough for him to be a Neanderthal...
His chin is also now too narrow to support a lower jaw with teeth.
Strange looking youth, that's for sure!

Face is much better this time, but the hair still isn't right, Isn't hair hard to do?

I am beginning to hate hair..lol
but disagree with chin too narrow