Numerals should be parallel to the tower.

It seems like it's missing something. Maybe some clouds in the sky, or a bird on the left hand side. The eye just travels down and off the bottom of the page. It needs something to bring the eye back up into the composition.

Agreed... sometimes having a large blank space is not entirely desirable!

Nice mood, feels gritty and grungy. Good luck!

nice idea and good mood

love the colours... all the best

right on theme and a great way to get the ball rolling.. good luck author

(I do have to admit this is the first time I've ever heard of Steampunk.. we used to call it industrial surrealism.. so I'm learning a whole new concept

Don't know if its right on theme or not. But, seriously I like the Image. The whole dark feel associated with it. Good Job.................

Cool image....has a nice sense of depth my only nitpick would be to move the front smoke stack from dead center a little to the left

great job!

Great pic.

I love this, love the way you have put it all together, goodluck..... just dont forget to give links to deviant artists so they can see what you have made

nice!

This is not bad, however, it's more post apocalyptic (sp?) than steampunk.

Looks cool and screams 'industrial revolution,' but I think steampunk is about applying technology to make life better (from a Victorian perspective and perhaps naively). Steampunk strikes me as inherently optimistic while this has the apocalyptic feel that shadowpwner noticed. Translation: not quite on theme.

You have the right mood...Now let it run wild Maybe play around with Big Ben Good Luck