Nice idea, and nice masking! I would try and adjust the light on the thistlem itself by burning the right side or applying a white to black gradient set to multiply and then playing with the opacity. Good job other wise.

The cracks also need highlights at the rightside of the dark shadow lines.

You've got the same cracks running through the spine and ribs...
Edit: You could have fixed the crack thing since my comment. Guess you don't care to...you still have time.

You've got cracks running over the arm's edges.Very simple fix. You must have just lost interests in this entry. Probably happens to everybody.

@jawshoewhah, this is really an older version, the final progect photoshop file got corrupted

lots of work author.. nice image... i agree with a few of the adjustments that would help to improve.

oh my god! what a horrible ironic. Really good idea!!! (i forgive you 3DS max) must be a fav!

SOLARIS's enthusiasm is infectious..LOL.. very good author..the Irony is spell binding

You could start your own business with an idea like this!! I'd buy it!! Great image, wonderful job

Super idea very nice work on the transparency!

Nice job...but I'm looking for the packaging per contest guidelines.

EDIT: Not a problem. Good job. I might add your English seems very good.

awesome!

Thanks for comments.Solaris, hope will be a long peace with 3d max.GolemAura, above irony is self-irony. Ponti, deal,50% -50% its OK ? Pixelkid, thanks, see edit.But pls notice that is not fair for a non-english speaker to compete on a marketing slogan with english speakers. Thats why I avoid at first moment the packaging.

lol...

you'd put the toothbrush companies out of business good work

the idea is great, the packaging not so much... you did a great job on 3Ds Max to create the toothbrush, but such a nice work deserves a better packaging... the type is not the best, as well as the color combination, and the size is deeply wrong... you should work on the package because you have a nice idea in here

muaahhahhahaa! how to get out from washing the teeth? cheers!

OK guys, ready to make a joint-venture with you . Mike, thanks, modified, I have done my best but not enough.Not because of geometry but cause of lights management scene. From the begginning I create the illumination for small objects. a big reflectant object change everything. Humanly speaking have not the patience at this moment to recalculate all settings and made all long trial renders.Thanks again.

Winner!

good job

Nice idea!!! lol good luck

Bravo great idea!!

That's for sure something, kids would love Well... I would have loved these, too

congrats

nice idea

pretty good good luck

nice idea good luck..don't know waht to say abut the light perspective..but its ok

lol OUCH!!!

Nice idea good luck!

Nice work, good luck

nicely done!! A touch of shadow on the violet handle and it's perfect

congrats

Congratulations, celebrations, well done Keep up the good work

you did very well

congrats!!!!!!!