Cool, looks real ;D

Nice, but I would darken the letters a slight, hard to see. Also with the text; Move "that" down a step. It´s to close to the scull.
Maybe you can have it "not centered". Otherwise good job!

hehehe..

Pretty good

Several points of view make the difference

Great...love this...good luck author

Very innovative to interpret "card" as business card and I always like when the entry goes beyond the basic requirements to provide some context (the hand in this case). I think we can all relate to the sentiment, but apparently its wordiness necessitated squishing the letters which makes it a little bit difficult to read IMO. The skull graphic seems totally arbitrary (why a skull?) and I question going outside the dimensions of a standard business card -- which is maybe being too practical, but I do think an unexpected message in a standard format is the point of this contest. Also, I would expand the title to "Nice to meet you. Here's my card." (if that much length is allowed). {Would "Nice meeting you. My card." fit?} [BTW a comma after "view" wouldn't take up much space.]

Funny and a different "take"on the format. I don't see a particular reason for a skull either but that doesn't bother me at all. BTW DanLundberg, you wouldn't put a comma in front of a conjunction such as but or and. That wouldn't be proper grammar.

Much better after the changing. GL

i like the skull, it sets the mood for the business at hand

what a nice card lol

Cool, business card

Great idea......gl

cool entry, author! GL

nice job

GL

great idea ! very funny and well done

Hahahahaha, it made me smile
Awesome idea!!

Worth a smile. [BTW you're missing a space before "20."] Drop shadow on card front implies it's nearly resting on the background, but then we wouldn't be able to see the back of the card opening up. Those inconsistencies need to be resolved.

Fantastic...great humor author...u made me smile...and because of that and great execution high marks from me...

OH MY GOD!...

Meow,

hee hee ;D

UGH!!! YOU GOT ME Hook Line and Sinker..you stinker... LOL.. great job

cool

meow!

lol...made me laugh

Awesome card......GL

great and funny entry.. gl )))))))

nice

hehehe.. AWESOME... nit pick.. SURVIVING not serviving (that would be like you would be serving the baby up for dinner.. hehehe.. which is pretty funny in it's self... GOOD LUCK

EDIT: Excellent.. very very cute entry.. it's really difficult to show a card with a front and a back... but I believe this will be a fun contest...

Thanks Drivenslush! I knew I was missing something just didn't know what.

Goooood

"Good" idea, well blended! Would be nice if you could bend the text so it would look as if it was on the card rather than above it.

Thanks dusfinger! Adjusted accordingly.

i like it

Yes, certainly better now!

Very cute although not offensive.

Super cute.. hee hee

This is well thought out and a pretty picture but the toaster and electricity plugs are too distorted

thanks lchappell, you are absolutely right. I missed the plugs distortion problem but I believe the toasters distortion is from the skew in the paper. Thanks for pointing it out.

GL

so cute! great idea... gl

nice job

Congrats for your third place, Chalty!

Congratulations for 3rd

Congratulations!

Congrats!

Congrats !

Congrats on 3rd

Congrats!!!!

Congrats!!

Pretty original thinking! Maybe an idea to actual showing the stone where it's carved, so you get more the feeling of a (stone) card? Good luck!

Thanks for the suggestion. I will try to fix it as soon as I have time available.

well done author ! very funny

Interesting ..

Good one...best of luck author

very nice

GL

cool entry, gl

nice

Good luck with that...

Hilarious content, but execution could be stronger IMO. I would delete "Card to my ex!" and make it the title (without the the exclamation mark). Format the three purple introductory lines to the rhyming couplets identically: left justify by the image's left edge, initial cap, and end with an ellipsis (three periods). Plus in intro two I'd change "i" to "I'll" (with a cap I) and in intro three I'd capitlize both "i"'s. Start each couplet with an intitial cap, end each first line with a comma [first couplet is the outlier on these first two items], and end each second line with a period [final couplet deficient]. In couplet two, it's "I'm," "that's," and "I" (capital I's and apostrophes). In couplet three, I would replace "until" with "but." The simple white background is kind of boring. The lower dark-gray segment on the heart might be more interesting as a drop shadow.

:o

So... it means that he changed his mind, his side... Crazy!

Best of Luck.....

cool entry gl

good luck