
"Be careful when you swim"
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(5 years and 3288 days ago)
(5 years and 3305 days ago)
The neck area looks kind of wonky - The really dark shape beneath the head makes it look like the head is floating, and it doesn't look at all like a shadow...Nice job on the background!
Very good
The general mood, the colors and theme is nice, it's some details which could make the entry more finished. That's imo mostly the hair, that looks a bit too roughly drawn compared to the more clean rest of the images. Pay a bit longer attention to it, perhaps you can add a blending layer (with mode multiply) to make the dark parts a bit darker so the hair looks somewhat more smooth. Or just use a tinier brush to get thát detail which make the image more like a whole. Same story would be for the strings. Perhaps here and there the edges from the suit can be a bit softer too. But for the rest I'd think that Tim Burton would like this .
@Mossy: not sure, but maybe the dark shape you mention is not necessarely a shadow but some kind of necklace?
Author, good luck!
Other than maybe make the right side of the head the same shape of the left (since she's staring strait out) it looks like her head is deformed but other than that, this is still one of the best entries I've seen. Fix that and I think you just might have a winner. GL!
I tried to fix the most critical parts, really thanks for you guys for making me know.
with few little adjustments this could be a fantastic image(mostly the hair)..but having said that, i really like it..the mood is great..goes to my fav's..good luck!
I really like this image! I couldn't really tell what was on the right side of her untill about the 5th look. Also not sure why you added an sbs with just one background image?
like the concept very much..., good luck author
love this, good luck!!!
Gruesome little thing isn't she. Has a very doll-like quality to her which makes it more impressive considering the scissors and the clothsline! Love the concept!
congrats on a well deserved 1st place
Congrats for the first place !
Congrats, this is really creepy
congrats very nice work.
congratulations...
Congrats!!
congratulations...
Congratulations darling, you deserve it!
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(5 years and 3312 days ago)
Looks good, nice job
Congratulations, gives the room feel submerged in the sea
Can't place a finger on why I like this so much. It does have a dreamy underwater effect...perhaps almost like the way one of the elite rooms on the Titanic might have looked right after the sinking. Nice job author!
Reminds me of movie titanic. Good work Author. you did a good job with blurs. GL
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Gostei, muito bom! ah e eu sou diferente mesmo, sou brasileiro pow!
I Like it
REally nice ambience author...gud luck
Agree with all that has been said ... very nice treatment on the source!
Nice blue supernatural atmosphere
very very nice work author...some bubbles would be nice addition...best of luck
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Thanks to Marcus Ranum (www.ranum.com) for the lady and to Jin-KStock for the lovely horse. All other images used are my own. See SBS. Animated GIF is step 28.
Dedicated to my sister ... because she will always be with me in my dreams.
EDIT to SBS: I have added a step to show scale and proportions - Step 33 (5 years and 3312 days ago)
I hate that you do hair so well and demand a one to one lesson! great image author!
Anytime my friend. Once you have the trick it is not too bad, just time and patience and it doesn't hurt to have a tablet
nice nice nice
very well
favourite entry
and the minute i saw this image, i knew ... you've done a LOVELY job. such a touching piece of work.
and hey, when you teach geex, will you promise to teach me too???
Excellent command of the fantasy genre.. every image you make makes me think of fairy tales and story books.
Edit: My only suggestion would be to make the model's shadow a little lighter, it seems very dark at the moment (or maybe blur it more?) If not i'd darken up the shadow the horse is casting.
@ Ponti - Thank you for the critique. I was really unsure how dark to make her shadow and was hoping someone would comment. I have made some changes - lightened the models shadow and darkened the horse a bit. I think it looks better now. Thanks for the help, your comment was very much appreciated
I realize this is surrealism, so all bets are off, but the figure doesn't match the scale of the horse. All else is well done!
Thanks CMYK
I did check here http://figure-drawings.com/How-to-Draw-Proportions-3.html, as she is curled up I based the proportions on the size of her head (within reason as it is a fantasy/surreal image as you noted). I added a step to the SBS to show what I did ...Check it out and let me know what you think?
Look at images (photos) of horse and riders...the woman is just too small.
good work.
Would love to see this in really large scale. Nice job!
This is amazing entry author,really really amazing...and black and white mood is perfect for this...your details are perfect...love the lucid feel of movement on horse tail and mane...And as for the size of the horse and the model...don't worry author...this is the Nahar horse of the Valar god Oromë and he is huge...on his back is Arien the maiden whom the Valar chose from among the Maiar to guide the vessel of the Sun...through clouds and sky Nahar take Arien to the Sun...so for that quest horse have to be huge...
erathion: If there was a super, double gold thumbs up it would be yours! What a wonderful story! I had forgotten about Nahar (LOTR... right?) Thank you so much for sharing your vision of my vision (I will have to steal the story for future use)!
wow ...... wonderful imagination..... really a dream work ...... all the best to u author .......
A whole story in a picture.. Love it, great execution, amazing hair. I thought the size of the horse's back was to big, but it didn't bother me one bit, it fits the purpose of this image very well.. I even think when the horse was the "right" size it would have not looked as surreal as it did and did not have the ability to mesmerize, what it sure does now.. Great work author and good luck!
congratulations...
Congrats!!
congrats for the 2nd place, beautiful job...
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Model + painting (5 years and 3317 days ago)
Like the idea. Welcome to pxleyes.
Nice image, to bad there is no sbs..
Aside from the white edges around the hair that have been smudged, it's a well presented image. I'm not too keen on the frame, but it's up to you. Good luck
I like this a lot...but I do find the oval shape a bit distracting.
Great change... i like what you did to her.
very nice work...gl
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deeply in love with the swirly water! great job!!
wow, this is creative! like it!!
Nice work....love it
lovely monster
Great concept author...fantastic mood and great effects...best of luck
Pretty good composition .
Congrats!!
congratulation...
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