Perhaps it was better to remove the reflection in the eye, just my opinion

Well done but i agree with lincemiope.

Really? I thought it would make it more realistic.. how about just turning it down a bit?

First, I deliver thee from black and white see how he is.
Then the pupil to make the contrast orange, white on a red dot, small, with small veins.
Symbolically, the eye is sweet, but also bloodshot.
Sorry if I said some stupid things, hello

my translate is daft
in italiano :

prova a levare tutto il riflesso bianco dal nero dell'occhio e vedi come sta.
Suggerivo di mettere un pallino rosso, con le piccole vene, nel bianco dell'occhio, da contrapporre alla pupilla arancio, in modo da fare simbolicamente un occhio dolce, ma iniettato di sangue.

maybe your translator is better than my

I feel a great job, neat, precise, well done

Nicely done! GL author