Nice idea. The skin on the hole in the neck needs thickness. The white shape overlapping the figure is just distracting. Clean up the clothes as JimLemon suggests. This could be great with some tweaks. GL author.
The robot section lines need some work, they look black and painted on, especially by the crotch and her elbow, where there is a small light reflection inside the black at the top...I agree with CMYK about the distracting white shape. It adds nothing to the image, and looks like she has a bad gas problem...
author says:
@cmyk & Jim, Thanks for your comments...I`ve sharpend the clothing slightly & given the neck skin more thickness, also removed the smokey shape (wasn't sure about that myself)
Hope thats improved
It is really nice, though the clothes look a bit blurry at certain areas...
Nice idea. The skin on the hole in the neck needs thickness. The white shape overlapping the figure is just distracting. Clean up the clothes as JimLemon suggests. This could be great with some tweaks. GL author.
The robot section lines need some work, they look black and painted on, especially by the crotch and her elbow, where there is a small light reflection inside the black at the top...I agree with CMYK about the distracting white shape. It adds nothing to the image, and looks like she has a bad gas problem...
@cmyk & Jim, Thanks for your comments...I`ve sharpend the clothing slightly & given the neck skin more thickness, also removed the smokey shape (wasn't sure about that myself)
Hope thats improved
Lookin' better!
Definitely better!
Now this is very well done! Best of luck!
Why do manipulations of hot cyborgs always get the votes? :P
Great ma'nip'ulation GL author.
Very nice work robotizing her, and I especially love your background!
Congrats Geex awesome work
Nice Job Congrats
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