thanks to jaskier for suggesting this image for a contest http://www.pxleyes.com/images/contests/gate-ornament/fullsize/sourceimage.jpg (5 years and 3107 days ago)
It's interesting, but too busy looking as a composition, with no clear subject or focal point. The red shape is visually dominant in placement and color, but the white then pushes the eye away from it, with all the rest of the objects not really explaining much more. The people on the left are too dark on top, you can barely see them, so they look like a bunch of legs. The egg thing discourages perusal with the 3 tanks in the front...They're like a visual "gate." This could be much more dynamic with a bit more work.
~M
Lots of fun weirdness in this author.. GOOD LUCK (Very Adult Swim)
It's interesting, but too busy looking as a composition, with no clear subject or focal point. The red shape is visually dominant in placement and color, but the white then pushes the eye away from it, with all the rest of the objects not really explaining much more. The people on the left are too dark on top, you can barely see them, so they look like a bunch of legs. The egg thing discourages perusal with the 3 tanks in the front...They're like a visual "gate." This could be much more dynamic with a bit more work.
~M
love it author
i think "fav" mark says all things bout ur entry
best luck
Futuristic
congrats on 2nd lots of great entries in this comp.
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