Your shadow is way too heavy imo would also be cool if the message and the flower linked somehow, either by bringing them closer or graphically.....

Try making the shadow less opaque.

Okay, that was the natural shadow, so I didn't want to touch it much. I will work on it. Thanks for the tips, everybody!

Congrats nice work

funky cool

nice! psychedelia

Hi Res would help to see her face a bit more clearly. I can tell there is something under her eyes but not sure what it is.

Keiley22 has a good point. According to what I can see, I'd expect her to be more evil and seducing looking. Maybe also a bit more pale or bluish skin. With adding a light (ie from under) you can stress a lot more drama and suspence, vampires like that . Good luck!

I like in high res, definately makes it easier to see what you have done author. Can you give the blood a bit more of red in it, being a vampire the kill would have been fresh and the blood would have been brighter I lovvvvve vampires lol. And are they meant to be veins underneath her eyes? If so maybe put a bit of purple through them like she if full to the brim after her feast If you want to make her look a little bit more evil, use the liquify tool and just move her eyebrows up more into a point, if no liquify in the filter section, try the smudge tool, just be careful with that one. Still holding vote. And don't worry about editing, anyone that gives advice usually waits till the end to vote anyway

she just looks like she is chopped and pasted. Try blending her in with the background so she too looks like she is under the water.

Result is pretty ok, imo. Perhaps some suggestions: add more shading to the girl, mostly on her body around the mouth of the shark. This way it will look less flat. Same for the back of her hair, experiment with light and shade. You might want to blur here and there her hair too, gives the idea it has more underwater movement and it's a bit further away (to create some depth of field). Lastly you could try to add a color adjustment layer to make her a bit more blue, that's up to you. Good luck!

LOL

Nice idea, maybe a biiiiit lighter here and there (ie by adding some light sources?) would have been nice. Good luck!