I would have flipped the hair horizontal (or the guy) cause i believe the light on the hair and the guy is coming from opposite directions. Holding off my vote for now

Ditto.

You are right Eladine!..
im gonna work on that..
I think little more shadow to the right side..
thanks for the suggestion!

Did a little update..I played a bit around with moving the hair
but..hmmm..I like it this way..
tried my best on the shadow Eladine .

Yeah you did made clear improvements to the image

wonderful image choices

Thanks for all comments!

Great job, author, love the yellowed retro coloring, this is hilarious!

Thank u pearlie!..

great job...best of the bunch