The head is distorted in proportion. Her forehead looks huge, and her hairline too far back on the side.

I tried to fix it.

So what does the Kanji say?

Very unique and effective use of source.

Very creative. Love the color palette which still links back to the source. Knowing what the text says might add a further level of appreciation (which might also suggest a more interesting title for this entry).

The chinese signs have mere a graphical function, but if you'd like the translation;
Two sentences from "our father who art in heaven"
1)Give us this day our daily bread
2) deliver us from evil
makes it more mystique maybe!

Nice poster, love the pastel colors

I think it would have looked better if the lamp would have been straight down from the "ceiling"

Nice work with the lighting effects.

Yeah I agree Eladine, I was actually trying to find a light that was hanging straight down, but then came across this source and really liked the texture and everything so I decided to go with it

Fine art work.. luv it..

Thanks I certainly appreciate hearing that!

Congrats