(5 years and 2414 days ago)
The lighting works well. Try to align the horizontal bar on the cross with the perspective of the windows.
Thanks Bob... I worked in the perspective of the cross bar, republished the image, but for any reason,it does not show the change. But please check the HR image, the change appears there.Probable some problems with the new loading system.
It is ok now....
Good image, but try to work on some of the edges on the stick & figure. A soft blur brush will fix most of them. And since it's dark, the upper part of the figure could be less saturated...color fades in the dark. GL author.
Good points, I went back over it and fixed some things. I also, got rid of the pink tint, too problematic. Thanks!
Besides what Bob said, if he's a Hobbit shouldn't he have hairy feet?
Hair added...
Edges of hair on feet ain't hairy, and you haven't done anything to refine the edges mentioned above.
Edges were fixed, I'm happy with the feet.
The light and shadows in this are kind of all over the place, though I can appreciate the difficulty. I really like the concept, but otherwise I'm not quite sure what to make of it.
Maybe you could've moved the model slightly to the right then made the bottom left mushroom bigger, therefore making it cast more light. I find if I'm having trouble lighting a scene it helps to have a dominant light source to fool the eye.
It also helps to selectively blur/sharpen parts of the image to mimic the way humans perceive things i.e. I know the dude is the focus of the image but while I'm looking at him my brain is still noticing how sharp the background and buildings are and therefore it feels as if something is a bit wrong. Hope that makes sense!
Appreciate the input but I've spent all the time I will on this one.
Creating an entry is a lot of work so I understand your decision to stop revising. But for the future, I would note that a Rule-of-Thirds (rather than centering) composition can be more dramatic (and might have yielded a compelling diagonal arrangement here if your hobbit were moved to the right and the little mushrooms were in the middle). [BTW the horizon line of the lamp at his feet doesn't seem to match that of the other elements.]
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