Try to fix the perspective...

Perspective is wrong,very wrong,everything else is great work,i love color's and full composition...fix that perspective and u will have very nice work...

Perspective work. this means visual alignment of image. there are tools within image programs to help you develop these skills. explore tutorials , use ruler lines and perspective tools .nice use of image.

The perspective opf the ipod is wrong, seeing as how it's your own image it may have been a lot easier to take a different photo with the correct angle.