Where did the bullet stop?

Your source pic has the fruits arranged along a diagonal line so your bullet is only piercing the pear which is not that obvious from your image (much too much pear-entry debris), plus the pear-exit debris is clearly not all originating from the exit point. A crisper bullet (with less crisp reflection) would also be more convincing (without the path-blur behind it).

I would like to propose this as an example, the bullet portrayed here was not intended to be a pellet.
http://www.glacialwanderer.com/_blog/blog2009/08_August/hs_apple_
3403.jpg

this is nice.. GL author

nice...good luck

the big thing to me is that the bullet is off perspective and off the path of the holes made... drawing a line through it gave me an up ward trajectory which then means you should have the bullet slightly above the apple... also far too much entry debris and imo, a bit too much exit as well... but just slightly so ;] good work on the exit debris though looks pretty good. GL!

THANK YOU NATOR

bjaockx, I totally disagree with you' when I draw a line through the holes I created the projectile is in the correct place,besides most always a bullet will start to tumble when it strikes its target or an object. As for the debris well that is no BB shot and please take a look at some of these as examples http://iniwoo.net/inspiration/amazing-high-speed-photography/
http://www.glacialwanderer.com/_blog/blog2009/08_August/hs_apple_
3403.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nebarnix/635585968/

nice work!

good work and good luck

looks great good luck

good chop

beautiful

personally i think everything here could have been done better with out the use of the source

a little more use of the source in the comets (maybe the grass or the leather thing) could add to the effect

it s your opinion and i respect it, but you could say something useful .

nice job author..though a SBS would be helpful (I can see the jeans quite clear in the HIGH RES but a lot of Newbies would probably benefit from a step by step...especially how you merged the texture of the jeans into the texture/comet.. (showing how you used the star brushes would be a cool TUT!!!! ) It's a very nice image overall.. and the work is very well done.. .. GOOD LUCK

thank you a lot golemAura, i will make a sbs tomorow.

Golem is right........SBS would be helpful in order form opinion. waiting to vote til then.

I can see a lot of the jeans pattern in the HR.

very cool image author!

just a suggest, maybe it's better if the result more bright....

sorry for the lately sbs, i was very busy this week.

I like this image. Sorry i have no real feedback for you author except nice use of source.

nice idea maybe a bit much on the bigger stars I do like the comet good luck Author