their heads are a bit off.. you might want to take Jacob head and place it over hers to get the right size then move back in place (so their head sizes are the same)..and place his head behind hers (men are usually portrayed behind the heroine) it seems that jacobs head is a bit smaller then it should be, especially his head being in front of hers, but it's a good image overall
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I would but I have a hard time seeing dark colors... Thanks for the tip. =)
GolemAura gives you good advice..............if you have such a hard time seeing dark colors, why have you chosen to use them? I think it's a good idea that could be better executed!
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I have chosen them simply because I wanted to. And I'm still somewhat new to this. And the constructive criticism is greatly apperciated to help better myself.
oh i forgot to comment the entry itself.. i can still see edwards hair, it's quite clear actually, along with that clean cut of jacob's head.. there are also some problems with the background. you could just put jacob's face, keeping everything else from edward. also, you REALLY should consider calibrating your monitor, or at least chop images in a dark room because on my samsung these mistakes are really visible
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their heads are a bit off.. you might want to take Jacob head and place it over hers to get the right size then move back in place (so their head sizes are the same)..and place his head behind hers (men are usually portrayed behind the heroine) it seems that jacobs head is a bit smaller then it should be, especially his head being in front of hers, but it's a good image overall
I would but I have a hard time seeing dark colors... Thanks for the tip. =)
very nice!
Thank you Tuckinator
here come the polyvore images.....
Oh and up the top you can still see that other guys hair.
Wacky light sources....
man, i hate that movie.. and i had to go see it against my will
I hear you elficho... i would've fallen asleep had the girls not been shouting whenever that guy came on screen!
GolemAura gives you good advice..............if you have such a hard time seeing dark colors, why have you chosen to use them? I think it's a good idea that could be better executed!
I have chosen them simply because I wanted to. And I'm still somewhat new to this. And the constructive criticism is greatly apperciated to help better myself.
oh i forgot to comment the entry itself.. i can still see edwards hair, it's quite clear actually, along with that clean cut of jacob's head.. there are also some problems with the background. you could just put jacob's face, keeping everything else from edward. also, you REALLY should consider calibrating your monitor, or at least chop images in a dark room because on my samsung these mistakes are really visible
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