Love the flames, but the "outline effect" on the lemon and the bottom of the pitcher hurt the overall image. Bring back a little more of the lemon and work on the very bottom area a bit, bringing the flames down into the solid black, so it looks like the lemon is plunging into a pitcher of fire more.

Thanks for the input i have reworked the lemon and completely agree it looks better with more of the lemon detail.

I will play around with the flames to see if i can make any improvements.

Thanks

Good image, but I don't see why there would be water drops in the flames.

CMYK46 i had considered this and wasn't sure whether to keep them or not i will see what removing them adds / takes away from the image when playing with the flames.

Better with the lemon...
Those aren't water drops, that's flammable oil that hasn't ignited yet...

I love it, FIRE WATER. I would call that "mampoor' (a drink that is home made and is almost pure alcohol)

Thats some imagination, MossyB hehe, and you really do have to have it for these contests, not everything has to be so literal. Cool image, author!

Um, why the title Jug?

is it ok now.

regular swan giant cup giant bird ?or tiny swan regular cup regular bird ? Am afraid the title is the least of your probs with this. Good luck though

i don't think the shadow of the bird is suppose to be like that.

The bird shadow would be similar to the handle shadow.

i worked on it and changed the shadow but i cant upload it now.

Looks good!

EXTREMELY SIMPLE... and EXTREMELY WELL DONE.. even the space above works... WOW

COOL....

Excellent job!

Very good and unique idea! I really like the handle, that looks great I don't know, who easy it is to change things you've made with Bryce, but maybe you could make the space between the jug and the handle a bit bigger, cause right now it looks very tight and I don't think, that you could actually get your hand in between that. But like I said: it also looks very good like it is Good luck!