lips look a bit like the candy-wax lips they used to sell at the candy store. they need to be better blended with the source. as do the teeth. i'd say for the blood, make it come from the tips up wards, instead of her gums down...it looks like she has a bad case of vampire-gingivitus. bit into something not quite fresh? anyway... the skin tone is okay. i think i'd have made her eyes more vampire-ish. You've got time to fix it up still Good luck.

i agree with jadedink

there, i did some remake.. more suggestions? i did eyes too, little bit yellow and some red capillaries in it..

thx for sugestions btw

her look is so intense..good job on the teeth

i just don't know what more to do so she'd look more dramatic and frustrating..