I like the idea. It seems to require a brighter/sunnier environment, however: brighter sky, castle, and foreground with strong shadows cast by the towers and figures. I would use the shading on the assassin to determine the light direction and how to shade the rest of the elements. I think if Ms. Macgyver were using a belt buckle or had her compact out while powdering her nose, this would portray a moment of greater creative spontaneity on her part.

Seeing as your not impressed by it yourself... maybe you should keep at it till you get it how it is in your head...

all the best ............. not bad .............

Watch out for borders around the models, and also they both have opposite light sources.

the shoe of the girl on the right should be darker. Also I didn't understand the image until I read the title. Perhaps adding more contrast or a different hue between the two sides would separate them more. Good luck!

all the best .............

Make sure that you check that all your light in your image is correct.. Be carefull not to have light shining from the left but the girl that's sitting down has ligh on her right cheek

good luck to you..

I love your user name! I'm giving you bonus point just for that alone. GL!

all the best to u author ...........

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nice,great title...gl

nice job author .... Gud Luck ........

Nice one.....gl

Nice background and mood

definitely simple. why so pixelated?

im not sure, maybe i saved it in a low quality, might improve on it when i get the chance

It is awfully simple, but that might be redeemable if there were any recognizable hint of the source image.

nice