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longing - created by dekwid

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(5 years and 3063 days ago)

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longing

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CorneliaMladenova says:

This image simply deserves a big WOW!

author says:

hehehe maybe not WOW, Cornelia,...but woooouu....ooouu...wooooouuuu........just the way the creature cries......wooouu....ooouuu...woooouuuuuu......hehehe...
thanks all for the comments....woooouuu....

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love ,loss and longing - created by scratzilla1

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After many years we were told
We would have a baby
To love and to hold.
Emotions dancing above the clouds
The miracle of birth
Finally ours

a swollen belly and love filled hands
a family making baby plans
a little life so tiny and yet so bold
dad wonders what baby will be
when grown and old. .

your room is a desert
and I silently weep
You left us to early
the pain runs deep.
I close my eyes and utter a prayer
All I want is my little one near

I rub my belly and your not there
I create a river
Started with a single tear
I feel so alone now that youâ€™re gone
they say in time I will move on.

Coming to terms
Little love had to part
Now only to be held within my heart
I pray for heaven to send me a daughter or son
I have no preference for either one
Please send one that is healthy
to love and to hold
A baby that can grow and live to be old
(written by author)

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love, loss, and, longing

ponti55 says:

I think you need to try to match all the colours together, and add a few more shadows for the heart, the knife and the baby. Good luck!

author says:

thank you will make changes.

GolemAura says:

while this is a very emotional piece... You could make the message even clearer if you changed the chair into a rocking chair and made the knife less commercial looking,, (a dagger would be more emotional then a serrated steak knife and a rocker would connect the baby with the rocking heart.. but this is your vision.. so TAKE THIS ONLY AS A SUGGESTION... if this is the vision you wanted.. then by all means stick with it.. Just trying to help and god bless

EDIT: Sorry.. didn't look close enough to the high res.. but the DAGGER is MUCH better... once again.. god bless

author says:

it is a rocker. Golemaura... it was ment as the chair a mother would feed and nurse a newborn.. i love the idea of changing the knife. thanks.

thanks for the feed back i like the dagger better

SHIPLEYGIRL says:

beautiful work but i got to go cry now

ladybug says:

i didn't even need to read your beautiful poem to see your sorrow! My heart goes out to you ! I love your image , good luck !

Eladine says:

the sand below the chair is too mucha diff color from the dry ground other then that.. it takes time to give it a place but you wotn forget it...

author says:

thank you everyone for taking the time to comment. Eladine.. the colour under the chair is suppose to the the river of tears... hence the colour difference... thanks for the feedback.