Nice concept, but it's too dark, she looks like she has no feet...

I'll try to lighten up. The feet were cut out in the original image. I darkened it to help it blend.

Aha! She had no feet to be lost...Well, that's where your chopping skills should be put to the challenge, give poor Alice some feet!

Nice concept, yes. I can live with the non-showing feet, but the head is imo a bit too distorted. It's ok for the body, but I'd keep the head a bit more how it originally was. The cat is funny . Good luck!

Perhaps give it some background it would give more dynamic to your work.

Very dark and creepy , great pic!

I like the dark creepy feel to it and the way the characters are stretched out like you did, even the way the hand comes out to 'restrain' the cat... but the feet are missing - maybe some furniture or other "obstacle" in front of her, like a low table with those objects sitting on it?

I'm definitely going to try to do something with the feet. I made it look awkward and was going for a cartoony feel, which is why the girl looks strange. I wanted her to look very different from the model so I accentuated her features.