Credits to Adam Borkowski , Darren Nickerson , ~matrija-stock , =SalsolaStock and Sergey Tokarev and =night-fate-stock.
Updated. (5 years and 3311 days ago)
- 1: Baby
- 2: Elephant
- 3: Additional Sky
- 4: Mountains
- 5: Grass Field
- 6: Texture
Credits to Adam Borkowski , Darren Nickerson , ~matrija-stock , =SalsolaStock and Sergey Tokarev and =night-fate-stock.
Updated. (5 years and 3311 days ago)
Thanks for all your feedback. I have made some changes which you all mentioned and feel this has improved the image 100% from the original. Once again thanks for your feedback and pointing me in the right direction. (5 years and 3316 days ago)
Try to make the water a little more transparent
good work
Yeah, i see what you mean Thanks
Instead of keeping the reflection on the edges like in the original try to take a piece of that rock & dolphins, warp it and lower oppacity to give realistic reflection on the recipient's walls ( i hope you understand what I'm saying.
And yeah, make the water trasparent & the jar itself.
Afterwards, select a the part of the image behind the jar and distort it. Something like this:
http://thenowandthen.files.wordpress.com/2009/10/irving-penn-girl-behind-bottle-1949.jpg?w=525
The water needs transparency... it looks like milk.
It looks better.
Very cute!
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With thanks to andres.thor for the image of the prostrate man. (5 years and 3322 days ago)
Good idea, but edges need cleaning up, especially on the left leg. Part of the background is still there between the jeans & shoe on the right side, and there's some sort of patch beneath the man's eye.
Now for once, CMYK46, you're very wrong - the legs are perfectly cut out, they are in fact seperate legs and clean as a whistle - am going to add them to my sbs now ( thought I'd done that) The patch under the man's eye is just part of him , (his lower lashes I believe) - does look odd though I must admit. I think you can see that if you look at the original pic in SBS's. Off to add the clean cut legs now........
Legs now No. 7 in sbs. Not had time to doctor them so that's how they were and are!
I can wait for a little apology - but bear in mind that I am booked in fot the "Horse og the year show" NOVEMBER 2011
This is nitpicking, but on the jeans beneath the man's eye, compare to the source image...there's some sort of irregularity there that looks like it's patched in. And at right of the left shoe, directly below the cuff, there's still a triangular piece of background that the arm of the star is pointing at.
The figure is a bit too sharp in focus. A little Depth of Field blurring would help the visual believability.
The left leg is problematic to this piece. Looking at the DOF blur of the floor and the angle of the camera, that left foot should be slightly larger at the heel, and toe needs to be angled upwards a bit, not "flat" on the bottom edge of the image. Also, the pant leg on the left leg is doing a weird "pinched in" mirror effect at the ankle, and shows an odd gray fade mark running about 10 inches up the back of the leg and stopping.
The light source on the man's face is very strong, striking his chin and lower cheek from the top. This would make the shadows of the legs stronger on the left.
I cannot visually "read" the forearm with the watch on it. It looks like a brushed metal pipe, not a hairy forearm...
Personally, I'd suggest darkening those eyelashes. The light reflection on them is too distracting to your overall image.
MossyB - I'll need a day or two to digest all the info, but thanks for it all the same. CKYM46, I QUOTE "And at right of the left shoe, directly below the cuff, there's still a triangular piece of background that the arm of the star is pointing at." It is in fact the black strap of the man's watch! With regard to the jeans just below the man's eye - it's just where the jeans fold on to the shoe (foot) Baggy jeans man!!
Tomorrow, tomorrow............
LOL...the LEFT shoe!
THE END! (Baggy jeans and all!) Thanks for all the comments, they really have been appreciated - have simply done my best! I realise it may not be good enough......
Dude, it's a good entry, don't get discouraged, we've all seen a hell lot worse. People here are just trying to help u improve, it would be more unpleasant not to have any feedback.
Very good.
looks great.... you did a good job.... good luck
Aw, thanks George!
Congrats.., very nice entry
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Here's a shot of me in my lab during some free time, powering up my backpack equipment for some traveling. I've devised a portal through which I can travel to other times in order to get some flying time in different aircraft.
OK, the truth: this is a composite of two photographs of me taken by my neighbor and friend, Tana, in my 'Amelia Earhart' outfit. I'm wearing a real leather flight helmet, with a pair of Swiss ski goggles - used for size and placement of the locomotive pieces. I found this cool shot of an aviation instruction center, and posed so that I could sit at the table holding the controlling device. See sbs for details. (5 years and 3326 days ago)
I like what youve done here, made your own stargate . Nice one.
Really nice use of source! Good luck!
A really fun image, I like it , perhaps you could work on the shadows of yourself and the stargate, look at the shadow of the table you are sitting at for direction and length, good luck
Thanks for the comments, and good observation Madamemonty - I've made some changes, looks better to me, shadows can be tricky! Feedback is appreciated.
Edit: Learned something new and tweaked this again.
Love the attention you have paid to the detail ... like the picture of Amelia on the wall and the goggles are perfect. Great work!
Yes indeed arca is right about the attention to detail, the shadow on the wall of yourself is a nice touch. Very nice!
Very creative
great humor and perfect execution...well done author
Congrats for your third place, Pearlie!
congrats
Thanks for your votes and support, this was a fun chop, I really got into it!
Congrats Pearlie, I saw you share the same interest with the mechanics things as me . That's the great job with many details, you should spend long time for searching the sources and put them well together.
Congrats!! Nicely done!
congrats for the 3rd place....
Congrats...great entry...
congrats!!!
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I made this one after my dearest friend Geert died at the age of 48.
Please see the sbs to understand all of the symbols
I put in this work. (5 years and 3326 days ago)
Thank you Nator
nice work...gl
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Great illustration of the size concept, but the lighting needs a lot of work. The planet is not lit so poorly that the baby's feet would be almost invisible in shadow, unless it was night. By contrast, there is a glaring white spot on the baby's shoulder that is very distracting, and is matched by the overly bright spot on the diaper.
The elephant "toy" (EXCELLENT size emphasis for the image) should have some sort of harness, instead of the cable just coming out of his back, and shows a rough extraction edge and some white pixels ~ Try using the Extraction Tool or the Pen Tool for better edges.
Consistency and edges are the key to good Photo-chopping, and you cannot "cover up" inconsistencies by simply making everything dark.
Well said MossyB. I think you said enough for everyone. But it is a cute idea
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