A very clever design. You should get rid of the light seal edge showing through, especially on the left edge of the bag. Left side/front is also quite blurry, it's like a picture taken with a camera that is out of focus. It could use a background also, white is always so.. boring.. Anyways, love your idea..

Gucci would be impressed

Very well executed!

Good idea...SBS would make it even better.

Creative. The far side of the clasp tongue needs an edge (looks like it melts right into the body of the bag now). I have to agree with Widiar that the white background is not very interesting.

Thank you all for your helpful comments.Changes are made.

wow...fantastic job...gl

hehehe.. very twisted author.. I LOVE IT!!!

Super !

Nice idea, shadow is missing tho, if you take a look at the foreground the trees a creating very long dark shadows so
the cat should be too. I may be wrong tho.......

better hope that kitty never gets and eye infection.. LOL.. excellent work author!!

Nice lighting on the cat...but I think Warlock may be right about a long shadow just a bit from behind because the front of the house isin shade. Nit picky because I am a cat owner...the pupils would probably be smaller being outside however, he may be shocked sitting on a house. The lighting really keeps the cat from being flat. Nice job again.

I gave the cat a longer shadow, I think it's better now, thanks for the advice!

The cover is too garish, and the ribbon just stops abruptly. Try to make this more realistic, keeping in mind the cover could be more subtle. It also would have a light source, and hence a shadow. GL.

Thanks CMYK46 I hope this is what you ment. I did a little retouch far as the ribbon its just a marker and I didn't do anything with it. Its the same as original was same spot. I could have cut it out maybe?

Do you see how you made some parts a bit dark just on the edge of the binding of the book (to the left)? Trying doing that to the whole front of the book to give it an older look. Try giving it an overlay tone that makes it look older.

Thanks k5683 I did some changes to age it I think that was what CMYK46 was trying to tell me I added three colors to add some age to it does it look any better?

author... it's gud but cover is very bright.. and inner part is luk like old so give original book color to color than look like nice.. and your inner color(gray) that's need some grunge background than luk older book
i think you understand wat iam say

Ok Thanks all I have scrapped album and redid it I hope this looks better.I used original with adjustments.

ya.. it's seems gud but gray paper seems it creating paper so remove gray color and add old paper to your album

Ok Thanks here is change removing gray.

very good chop

It's a matter of balance!