So many fingers! good job!

i hate that,lol

Good work and good luck

GL

nice

awesome job ! well done

very nice

Lovely. It looks like a painting. Very clean.

Very very nice work and i am sure would be better with some other background...good luck

Simple and great! That's the kind of work that i like!

it is nice and simple

I made a Quick guide.

nice, poor ducky she have an egg bigger then her

Maybe her husband is an emu or an ostrich!...

Awsome entry. Good luck.

Very cute. GL

so nice and cute... lovely entry.. gl

Good work

congratulations!!

Cool, looks real ;D

Nice, but I would darken the letters a slight, hard to see. Also with the text; Move "that" down a step. It´s to close to the scull.
Maybe you can have it "not centered". Otherwise good job!

hehehe..

Pretty good

Several points of view make the difference

Great...love this...good luck author

Very innovative to interpret "card" as business card and I always like when the entry goes beyond the basic requirements to provide some context (the hand in this case). I think we can all relate to the sentiment, but apparently its wordiness necessitated squishing the letters which makes it a little bit difficult to read IMO. The skull graphic seems totally arbitrary (why a skull?) and I question going outside the dimensions of a standard business card -- which is maybe being too practical, but I do think an unexpected message in a standard format is the point of this contest. Also, I would expand the title to "Nice to meet you. Here's my card." (if that much length is allowed). {Would "Nice meeting you. My card." fit?} [BTW a comma after "view" wouldn't take up much space.]

Funny and a different "take"on the format. I don't see a particular reason for a skull either but that doesn't bother me at all. BTW DanLundberg, you wouldn't put a comma in front of a conjunction such as but or and. That wouldn't be proper grammar.

Much better after the changing. GL

i like the skull, it sets the mood for the business at hand

what a nice card lol

Cool, business card

Great idea......gl

cool entry, author! GL

nice job

Good luck with that...

Hilarious content, but execution could be stronger IMO. I would delete "Card to my ex!" and make it the title (without the the exclamation mark). Format the three purple introductory lines to the rhyming couplets identically: left justify by the image's left edge, initial cap, and end with an ellipsis (three periods). Plus in intro two I'd change "i" to "I'll" (with a cap I) and in intro three I'd capitlize both "i"'s. Start each couplet with an intitial cap, end each first line with a comma [first couplet is the outlier on these first two items], and end each second line with a period [final couplet deficient]. In couplet two, it's "I'm," "that's," and "I" (capital I's and apostrophes). In couplet three, I would replace "until" with "but." The simple white background is kind of boring. The lower dark-gray segment on the heart might be more interesting as a drop shadow.

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So... it means that he changed his mind, his side... Crazy!

Best of Luck.....

cool entry gl

good luck

Nice work! And the title matches perfectly! Great job!

Very funny!

Haha...=) Good way to solve the fittingproblem of the bra...

lol nice author

I'm wondering if all boys do such things when their moms are not around...

You are crazy man

omg... lol! what a great sense of humor! gl

oh that is scary

good luck

Congrats for your first place, Baddream!

Congrats for 1st

Congrats!

Congrats, well done

congrats.............

Congrats!!

congrats !

great job