snake is ok, but the other creature need to 'liquify' the body and posture to make it more natural (add wings if possible)

nice idea

i think this work will look bether without the snake and creature, more realistic .

You could crop the entire left side off and redirect the focus onto the couple and the center arch, and it would help the image. The creatures are somewhat distracting, especially the "pig" hanging down.

i think there is a bit 2 much going on, but not bad

Reminds me of the characters in a Disney film good luck author

ultimate bro... in love wid tis edit