Coins are too sharp in comparison to the background.
And the reflections in the water doesn't blend so good with the water.

other than that very nice work
Good luck!

as for coins hit the water should make some splash, good luck


EDIT: now it looks like real rain, well done

Pretty big coins, eh?

I have added some more coins in the background more OOF and also added some splashes. Thanks for the suggestions.
As fr the size of the coins, if you are dreaming, dream big.

Good revision! I still say the poor girl wouldn't be smiling, she'd have multiple injuries from those giant coins.

Nice work on the splahes.

Very good idea.

Great concept. There is a white outline edge on the umbrella, and the top of the dog shows lighting that is inconsistent with the image (perhaps Image>Adjustments>Selective Color>whites would help adjust that), but otherwise is it a good chop.

nice piece author...best of luck

nice

very sweet mood

The animals themselves wouldn't be quite so blurry, but could have more motion blur trails...what would really make this would be if you had one actually splashing into the water!

Great ripples And great image!

good luck

Interesting.. good luck!

i like this... good work...

you could add to the sbs an explaination of how you made the rain

Moon should be on the left to match the light on clouds....

the background is really cool

nice work ... GL