(5 years and 2989 days ago)
The angle of the bed is tilted a bit too much, you'd slide off the bottom. Your corners are also a bit too thick and don't meet up quite right in the upper RH corner.
It would be nice to see something outside that pitch black window. Even the darkest night isn't quite that opaque...
Beautiful color scheme, though!
Without and SBS there is really know way to tell you how to fix the distortion issues on the sitting person. Distort/Warp/Puppet could help correct the odd body angles(his faded outline edges are a bit weird compared to the rest of the realism in the room.. also the lack of shadows cast by the standing figure makes him float...
While the concept (love the room walls) is quite good, the execution is a bit muddled. A little tender care might help this image a lot. (Good Luck)
at Level 10.. we would expect a little more... u didn't do shadows, juzt cut-n-paste.. it will be difficult gain votes
I know it doesn't sound good to hear, but just a frank comment, hope u not angry
Howdie stranger!
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