Hi res would be really nice ... hard to vote without seeing the detail. Looks like you have done a lot of work and I think you would get a better score with a Hi res. I will wait in hopes that you are able to get one uploaded

We only ask for Hi-res to have a better look at your mistakes! MUHAHAHA !
Just kidding author.
Light is coming from above so you should apply highlights & shadows on the body of the dragon considering that.
Imagine the body of the dragon as a torus and it will be easier to shade it, same with his face.
You can use either dodge/burn, or separate clipping layers with white& black to create values - that's my favorite technique.

thanks to all for the GREAT feed back... HOWEVER.... i just had a computer crash and lost this entry... I did not have a back up of my last 3 weeks entries....
I was not able to make the changes..

NOTE: loved the help you have given me and i will try and use the skills you have suggested in future entries.

Sorry to hear about the crash ... what a drag!

Try to fix the distortion on the knight & dragon. (Hit Shift key when scaling).

Purdy cool!!! (though I love anything that looks even remotely like a Torah... and I'm a Catholic LOL)

The idea is excelelnt, but CMYK is right, the do look distorted.

ponti I disagree with about the distortion besides you can be more original than reiterating another's comment

Nice, I like it