big white space on the left..but there is a lot of nice energy going round.. I 'd personally flip her to face the inside of the image instead of wondering off the page.. but it's totally up to you.. this is a surreal piece so anything goes.. good luck!!!

maybe just center the image

well done . keep up the good work

Very nice effect, like i've said before i really love images like these. Super high marks from me, and good luck in the contest!!

hahahaha cool

very creative

If you're going to do this kind of pic, pay attention to light sources...the light source on the girl is opposite that of the source pic.

very nice

something like pocket-shower...